An Embarrassing Experience-Draft2
when Ｉ was fifteen. One day when I fifteen. I didn't go home by bus,because my older sister rode a motorcycle to take me home. We went to eat for dinner. When I saw her,I mistook her for my older sister. I was very embarrassing!! I hope this wont happen again.
posted by ☆呆妹~＊☆" @ 8:07 AM
4 Comments:
At 4:14 AM,
FawnYma said…
我覺的妳的文章可以再加長一點。還有，妳第一句怪怪的，應該是when Ｉ was fifteen，one day…
p.s.認錯人還真的滿丟臉的…
At 5:48 AM,
Butterfly said…
可以再長一點而且可以不巾一直說older sister 說 sister 就可以了
At 1:36 AM,
飛奇 said…
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At 7:59 PM,
Tina said…
文章內容可以加長一點喔!!
sister可以用代名詞代替不用一直重複!
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