My bedroom-Draft2
My bedroom is so cute
The door on the right of clothing case.
The door on the left of shoe rack.
Shoe rack next to closet.
Closet in back of television.
Television is in front of the bed.
There are many dolls around the bed.
The door on the right of clothing case.
The door on the left of shoe rack.
Shoe rack next to closet.
Closet in back of television.
Television is in front of the bed.
There are many dolls around the bed.
posted by ☆呆妹~＊☆" @ 7:22 PM
3 Comments:
At 8:05 PM,
Tina said…
第一句沒有句點!
clo9thing??什麼字?
shoescase可以用shoe rack代替
Closet in back of television.->
Closet is in back of the TV.
沒有結論句喔!
還有句子間應該串聯起來
At 6:27 AM,
許雅婷 said…
clo9thing 打錯了吧
of shoescase.應該是of the shoescase
At 2:07 AM,
FawnYma said…
妳那個clo9thing 是外星字嗎? 妳要check一下啦！
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