A Good Memory That Will Last Fever draft 2

The first time I took part in talent performance was when I was in primary 6. I was a bit frightened because no one accompanies me to the stage. I could still remember that I made some mistake because I am too nervous. But I suddenly there encourage in me because I want to make the performance successful. After the nervous performance I am finally able to get off the stage and I feel more relax after that. I did wait for the prize presentation as I have other thing to do on that day. I just left the competition that way. Therefore I didn’t if I have won any prize. After a few days while we are attending the flag rising ceremony, suddenly someone call my name. I thought that my friend has called me but didn’t expect that I have to go to the commander stage to collect my prize. I was shock during that moment. I never think that I could win a prize.

A Good Memory That Will Last Fever draft 1

When I participate in the performance of talent and art for the first time. It is in grade six of primary school, really a little afraid at that time. Because people do not accompany me to appear on the stage together. Have remembered also falling because of carelessness because of being overstrain at that time . Then suddenly there was a courage, because I wanted to perform the intelligence and art well. Stepped down from the stage with great difficulty later. The whole individual is much more relaxed. Because there were things that day , can't stay etc. and award medals . Went back in this way. So I do not know either whether I have won the prize. Later in a few days. While hoisting a flag again , suddenly heard someone calling my name. Still thought that my friend called me. Have never expected that has wanted my superior to make the platform receive the award. The whole person was getting silly at that time. Unexpectedly I will gain the name.

A Dream I Had draft 2

One day, I suddenly find out there's only me in my house. The whole house is really silent which scares me a lot. I slowly walk from the room, slowly walks goes downstairs. I out of blue discover something pasts, but nothing did I really see. I felt really nervous at the time. Then I saw a scary thing. A big snake coming with many small snakes. Then the big suddenly runs over. I yelled before my death. I out of blue fell down from the bed. Originally I had a dream