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Friday, September 21, 2007

A Dream I Had draft 1

One day, I suddenly find out there's only me in my house. The whole house is really silent which scares me a lot. I slowly walk from the room, slowly walks goes downstairs. I suddenly discover something pasts, but nothing did I really see. I felt really nervous at the time. Then I saw a scary thing. A big snake coming with many small snakes. Then the big suddenly runs over. I yelled before my death. I suddenly fell down from the bed. Originally I had a dream.

1 Comments:

  • At 8:08 AM, Blogger Butterfly said…

    句構有些錯誤,而且suddenly可以用out of blue代換之類的,其他的字詞也可以替換一下

     

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