The result tests not good Draft 2
A man sits on the sofa.
He" takes a piece of paper and should be a report card on "the" his hand..
His face looks very "serious".
This kid should be this boy's son.
this kid is standing in his father'sd left side.
The son's facial expression isn't good and should be he examination to test badly.
The son want to say he will be harder next time.
Will not test again so in a mess. The father should answer to say next time Be testing to differ so you miserably!
He" takes a piece of paper and should be a report card on "the" his hand..
His face looks very "serious".
This kid should be this boy's son.
this kid is standing in his father'sd left side.
The son's facial expression isn't good and should be he examination to test badly.
The son want to say he will be harder next time.
Will not test again so in a mess. The father should answer to say next time Be testing to differ so you miserably!
posted by ☆呆妹~＊☆" @ 7:39 PM
4 Comments:
At 8:12 PM,
FawnYma said…
1. "He" takes a piece of paper and should be a report card on "the" his hand.
2. His face looks very "serious".
3.This kid should be this boy's son.這句很怪，妳想說什麼啊?
4. and shoulds be he examination to test badly. "and he must get bad grades on the exam"
At 8:14 PM,
Butterfly said…
1.Take a piece of paper and should be a report card on the his hand前面用taking後面我覺得taking a piece of paper and that is his reported card
2.This kid station is in father's left side. 我覺得this kid is standing in his father'sd left side
3.The son's facial expression isn't good and shoulds be he examination to test badly用should
4.The son should say he is next time with father to would certainly be hard working文法有顛倒的感覺應該是The son want to say he will be harder next time, 而且兒子可以給個名字
5.The father should answer to say next time Be testing to differ so you miserably!可以不用那麼多should要不然感覺是在心裡想的，而且這句我看不懂意思
At 8:26 PM,
許雅婷 said…
1.Take a piece of paper 是taking
2.stationg錯了吧
At 8:31 PM,
梁宜靜 said…
1..This man sits on the sofa->A man會比較好
2..shoulds be he examination to test badly->should不用加s
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