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Monday, April 16, 2007

Autobiography 1-2 Draft1

My name am ping ? Guo. Lily Is my English name. Is born to the Tainan city. The family member altogether has six. Father.stepmother.older brother.older sister.younger sister and me. In the family manages the factory. The daddy and elder brother's does in home factory. The stepmother works in outside. The elder sister and I also reads the high school. The younger sister goes study the elementary school for five yearsseveral.

My individuality quite is optimistic.lively.sometimes can quite be shy. The interest is accesses the net with the friend chats.listens to the music to eliminate a day-long weariness. Outside although ever has not exited has worked. But because in the family is runs the factory on to work in the home. But does in the home cannot because is the oneself family casuallydoes,Because the father teachs to us very strictly. Therefore thought does not do in the home compared to the relaxednesswhich works in outside. The present hope is can well read the book..

4 Comments:

  • At 7:16 AM, Blogger FawnYma said…

    1.My name "is" ping "."
    2."I was born in" the Tainan city.我覺得妳的文法有點奇怪,妳要不要先打到word 上檢查一下

     
  • At 7:57 AM, Blogger 梁宜靜 said…

    恩~~你最好先在word打..再看看是否有錯誤..

     
  • At 4:12 AM, Blogger 汶汶汶 said…

    我也這麼覺得

     
  • At 5:57 AM, Blogger Butterfly said…

    去word檢查完後,在唸一下語意順不順

     

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